Saturday, 23 January 2010

Abrasion

Graze my flesh with your touch.
Let the heat simmer with the
speed that illuminates desire.
Come light my fire, taketh
away the distaste that you
left behind.. you can
become mine, two into one.
Impression is good, lust
is better. Feel your way.
Step into my footprints.
Let the sand devour, rub
away everything that was
and still could be.
Come . Infuse me,
let us not waste another
moment of what we have.
I need. I want. I desire.
Come.....baby.....light
my fire.

16 comments:

UBERMOUTH said...

I LOVE that line- 'step into my footprints'. It's these lines which make you a poet.

Indigo said...

UBS ~ My a poet? Gosh..wow... thank you.

Secretia said...

That is beautiful, write every day, it's like food!

Secretia

Indigo said...

Secretia ~ I have a rare appetite for food as I do to write, some things I love to eat others I can't bare to touch my lips. Thank you I will write every day x Indi

BamaTrav said...

Indigo, I didn't know you cared.;)

Gray said...

That was amazing to read. You definitely have a gift.

Indigo said...

Bama Trav ~ Oh but I do :)

Indigo said...

Gray ~ Aw thank you, all I gotta do now is convince the publisher to print my poems, sell my book and for me to make a magga profit!

nitebyrd said...

Ubermouth is correct, you're most definitely a poet and a damn good one!

Indigo said...

nitebyrd ~ Thank you, these poems take me all of 5 minutes to write but all of weeks to think about, but then some times they just pop into my head...x

GIA said...

hi baby
i missed you

Spiky Zora Jones said...

Indigo: I like best the begining of this poem...Graze my flesh with your touch.
Let the heat simmer with the
speed that illuminates desire.

These words say it all...yes.
Nice poem honey. xxx

Indigo said...

GIA ~ thanks

Indigo said...

Spiky ~ thank you :) I like to go for the surreal aproach, say it how I see it, feel it..x

Just telling it like it is said...

Because your the fear in my eyes your the flier in my flies...
words from my favorite band!!

Indigo said...

Just telling it like it is ~ So who is your favourite band? Wo to you oh earth and see for the devil sends he beast with roth, let him who ahth understanding recon the number of the beast for it is a human number... it's number is 666. My favourite band Iron Maiden ;0