I stand in the
rain with my
head bowed
down. I can't
see what I am
looking for..
I am lost in
the sound.
I am cold
and alone,
I can't
speak. I
have no
words nor
letters to
say. I am
alone in
this dark
and empty
land. My
hands shake
with every
second, my
heart aches
with every
tick of the
clock. I am
alone, I am
lost. I feel
nothing.. I
am everything.
My soul bleeds
as so does my
nothing. I make
no sense, I
have no sense..
the world in
which I stand
is empty.. I
cannot find
what I am
looking for,
the rain chills
my flesh. I am..
nothing, yet
I am everything.
24 comments:
I think I have been there before, well, I have.
I am sooo with you here! Feeling this same exact way now...
Bama Trav ~ Yep, I'm where you've been and the weather's pretty crap too...
JStar ~ Am full of cold, snotty, can't breath ya know the stuff..winter n all that crap
BT ~ OK OK OK I've written a small poem for Tuesday poem day, it's on Spiky's blog, don't get too excited it's nothing brilliant, but I didn't want to disappoint anyone ;}
Indy, I left you something there, ;)
You are cold, it's dark, you look lost, but You Know Who You are!
Secretia
BT ~ thanks hun Indi x
Secretia ~ thankfully I do.
Indi
Indigo: One night when I was a young girl...this is how I felt. It changed me and how i saw the world.
it's a wonderful and sad...like i was.
xxx
Hugs and here's hoping your feeling much better soon. Damn colds are miserable indeed!
Al
Surrounded by so many people, and still so many of us feel like this.
Yes like the others I know these feelings! It's scary, it's adventurous, daring, inner turmoil...face it, just breath!
Meagan
you are indescribable wonderful!
Spiky ~ I don't want to feel this nothingness.. I loathe winter n all the germs that esculate with it. I will dig myself out of this darkness, hopefully by next Tuesday as it's my birthday...xxxx
Loverboy ~ Yeah they are pretty shitty aren't they?! Thanks Al
Indi x
Steel Horseman ~ I don't think the ecomomic climate helps either, our country is run by a complete 'wanker!' & if he isn't careful he may well get assasinated! wishful thinkin on my behalf!
Meagan ~ Thank you i would just breath if I wasn't bunged up, but I know what you mean x
Just telling it like it is ~ Aw thank you. I am indescribably bunged up too ;)
a powerful poem, indigo. lost
and found between your soul's
tears - the ultimate liquid prayer.
I'm in love (or were it lust) with your poetry style....
Nadege ~ I like your interpretation of my poetry, thank you
The Savage ~ 'WOW' thank you. It doesn't seem to matter how or what I write about, it touches other people's lives in such a way I could have never imagined
Spiky ~ yeah I've changed recently too. For the better I think xxxx thanks hun
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