Tuesday, 9 February 2010

Re cloth - Tuesday's Poem

Re cloth me.
Wrap tenderly
your love.
Kiss me,
tenderise me.
With sudden
abruptness
pull away.
Insult me
hurt me.
Be true
to you.
Your are,
you were
and most
ever likely
will be..
empty.
You feel
for no one.
I hurt
from this.
I now hate
from this.
You have
no means
of loving.
You have
no idea how
to give. I
did..and now
I can't.
Go...
leave, I
will say
no more.

16 comments:

BamaTrav said...

Indy - Nice work. I know how that feels. ;)

Indigo said...

Bama Trav ~ Thanks chick.. and it still does ;)x

Spiky Zora Jones said...

hum...it said alot. it shows a heart that is fatigued and jaded with love.

I can't say I know what it feels like...but I've seen it in the eyes of a few.

Love and relationships aren't always what we thought they were or are.

I'll take love when it is given only.

later sweets...fab poem, lots of passion in it.

Indigo said...

Spiky ~ I'm a hot passionate being. I love too much and in return ... stupid of me I know ..but I expect love back of some callaber, thanks hun

Loverboy said...

We are both really enjoying your blog and poetry.

You have a beautiful way with words!

Alabaster & Loverboy

BamaTrav said...

CHICK!!! Not a chick, Aahhahahahahahahaha!

Heff said...

Hey Indigo - when you get cold, does your avatar firm up and get bigger ?

Secretia said...

This poem explains it in bullet format. Well done!

Secretia

Meagan said...

My hand is over my heart...just wow OK!

Nice,
Meagan

Indigo said...

Alabaster & Loverboy ~ Thank ou, I 'm going thru a strange transition at the moment.. it could get better..

Indigo said...

Bama Trav ~OK not a chick, how about 'chuck?' ahahahahaha

Indigo said...

Heff ~ possibly !

Indigo said...

Secretia ~ yeah bullet form, I like that description, just require the gun now

Indigo said...

Meagan ~ Aw thank you ... can ya come hold my heart too?

Gregorio Martino said...

Great work Indigo. Keep it up.

Indigo said...

Gregorio Martino ~ Thank you :)