Sunday, 4 October 2009

One Vision

Reach out.
Reach out and touch me,
I can feel your pain..
I can feel your sorrow,
let me share.....
all your tomorrows.
Let me hold your heart
in the palm of my hand.
We can do this...
you just have to try.
Try to understand,
from my side of you eyes
how much I love you,
how much I've cried.
I'm doing my best, it's
hard but I'm getting
there. Time is all I have,
I want to spend it all
with you. There's no
where else I want to be.
To wake up beside you,
to kiss you in the rain...
I want to take you in my
arms, never looking back.
Our future holds so many
memories, we have to do
this, it's our destiny.
Come hold me, come kiss
me in the rain. Let me be
your end, until the stars
go out, until the world is
no more, I am here for
you, don't ever forget.

37 comments:

UBERMOUTH said...

If not for the fact that I know you are so sad over this, it would be beautiful, Indigo.

There are better days ahead for you when you do find your one.

Dulce said...

Yes Madam THAT IS Love...

Indigo said...

UBS~ I have to agree with you on that one. I wrote it from the heart, but as mine is ever so slightly dented at the moment I feel it isn't my best poem. I trust that if I keep didding away at this pain I am experiencing, it will clear. But at the moment it's like trying to platt fog! Thank you

Indigo said...

Dulce ~ It is love but not my finest... I have problems at this moment in time... I'm suffocating! Thank you for dropping in.

Indigo said...

Dulce ~ It is love but not my finest... I have problems at this moment in time... I'm suffocating! Thank you for dropping in.

Just Playin' said...

You really are quite talented. Next time you feel really happy, write some and see how it comes out. You asked if you might have known me in Texas, but no, I've never been there. There is light at the end of the tunnel....and the best is yet to come. Hang in there girl.

BamaTrav said...

Oddly enough, I know how you feel, I mentioned rain in my latest post.

BamaTrav said...

Tears that fill my bong.

Shadow said...

how beautiful is this!

Indigo said...

Just playin ~ I seem to have lost sight of that light at the end of the tunnel, but I will look again, thank you for your kind words.

Indigo said...

Bama Trav ~ Rain? It's pouring down!

Indigo said...

Shadow ~ why thankya, glad ya like it.

SPEAKING FROM THE CRIB said...

thanks for visiting me over at the crib - and for remarking that i am a clever boy - i'm not sure if you wrote that by mistake if i am a mother of two than surely i am a girl ... i have less than one percent of one brain cell left, so you must bear with me

i think it is a great poem - don't be so critical of yourself!

Indigo said...

SPEAKING FROM THE CRIB ~ Sorry, yeah I wrote it wrong. I'm sure you're a great mummy, but hard work none the less. Thank you for your honest comment, yes you're right, I am too critical of myself.

Kimberly said...

Awww...so sweet. Did you write this for me?

Spiky Zora Jones said...

It's beautiful. Amour...it is something huh?

she occupies you each and every day. from sun up to when the sun sinks into the west so gloriously.

Navagate that distance that is in between. Move in...and kiss.

you keep writing these gems sweetie. xxx

jennie_beane said...

beautiful. love it.

Indigo said...

kimberly ~ yes I wrote it for ya. Thank you for droppin in ;-)

Indigo said...

Spiky ~ I would follow you to the ends of the earth, til the tide runs dry n the man in the moon comes down to play, I love you with more strength each n every lasting day...thaks babe ... am I getting my strength back, I still think there's something missing.~xx~

Indigo said...

Spiky ~ I would follow you to the ends of the earth, til the tide runs dry n the man in the moon comes down to play, I love you with more strength each n every lasting day...thaks babe ... am I getting my strength back, I still think there's something missing.~xx~

Indigo said...

jennie beane. Thank you, glad you like it.

UBERMOUTH said...

Who the eff is Emilio?

Indigo said...

UBERMOUTH ~ I have no idea!

f1trey said...

ya get kudos for the gary moore and especially ELP.......frickin tarkus..... geeesh.....
and bein a biker....

mentioning the muscles helps too..... semipro football gives me those....

Indigo said...

f1try ~ I have a Yamaha FJR 1300 a nighty fast bike. You look after ya body well yeah? Nice to meet ya

buffalodick said...

I want to say something profound, and meaningful... all I got is you have nice nipples.. laugh and have a compliment- I think you need both..

Shelly Rayedeane said...

That is a very beautiful poem. Now get your club! I need some protecting!

Indigo said...

buffolodick ~ Errrr.... thank you :-)

Indigo said...

Shelly Rayedeane ~ Thank you, I got my club ready, where we meeting? ;-)

Watercolors @ Drop The Jeans said...

Indigo... Thanks for visiting, appreciated..

Can tell the pain in the writing, and im no stranger to that myself.. almost endin up losing my mind over love.

"But the sun rises again over Africa"

This is a Zulu expression, simple but true..

Indigo said...

Watercolors@Drop the Jeans ~ I thought only I could've felt the pain, it never occured to me that every one who read it could see the pain. I love the African saying, very apt & thank you calling by.

Scarlet said...

Who doesn't melt after reading something like this?? What a beautiful vision.

nitebyrd said...

Please know that even though we're in cyberspace, we want to help you keep your head above water. Anytime you need to vent, scream, cry - whatever, I'm here.

Indigo said...

Scarlet ~ I like to melt people. Thank you for calling by...

Indigo said...

nitebyrd ~ If ever you feel a nudge on your shoulder but see no one there, it's me trying to get to you... THANK YOU... I want to scream most days.

Jackie Adshead said...

That's beautiful - true love...

Indigo said...

Jackie ~ yeah I guess it is. Thank you