Sunday 3 October 2010

Guilty



Shit hits the fan.
Duck to avoid..I'm
not making sense..
can you tell? The
weather's turnin
cold again, but
my body heat is
hot, night sweats
not yet.. but I
feel they're on
the way. Achin
joints, swollen
knee.. Arthritis
fallin apart at
the seems. I
am headin for
distaster.
Lead me not
into temptation
I know the way
myself.. (laugh..
applaud) smilin
at this reflection
starin back at me,
oh shit, duck
to avoid.. I'm
startin to rant
again... glass
of red anyone?
Yes please..
purely medicinal
of course. Can
I have another
one please?
I decided to
have a lazy
day today..
time to relax,
not make hay.
I felt guilty
for sittin
down doin
Jack shit..
Gotta keep
goin, gotta
stay fit. I
failed..
got out
the hoover
cleaned
all through,
I'm tired
now.. will
this pain
cease? Will
I always
feel ill?
I can't do
this lazy
thing..I
think I'm
going crazy!
I can still
make my words
rhythm.. from
time to time.
I just don't
have excitin
to say.. so
I'm rantin
OK?????

12 comments:

nitebyrd said...

Indi ~ (((HUGS))) even when you rant you still make sense and are still brilliant!

Indi said...

nitebyrd ~ Ditto honey *smiling... whilst crying*

Indi

xxx

Playfully Yours said...

Whether you are ranting or not they are still your thoughts and feelings and nothing is more raw than that!!!

PY

Sandra said...

Well your ranting is pretty darn poetic. My ranting is more like a blood curdling scream.
I'm in awe of your talent.

Indi said...

PY ~ stop it, you're makin me blush now ;)and thank you


Indi

xx

Indi said...

Sandra ~ you should hear me when I'm in pain I scream like a banshee ;0


Indi

xx

Ms Smack said...

hang in there lovely lady xx

Indi said...

Ms.Smack ~ *wink*

Indi

xx

Red Shoes said...

Scream like a banshee?? Now that I would LOVE to hear!!!!

~shoes~

Indi said...

Red Shoes ~ One of my better performances *wink*

Indi

xx

UBERMOUTH said...

That would be a great rap song!

Sorry you're blue.

Indi said...

UBS ~ Ya reckon? ;}

Indi


xx