Monday, 25 October 2010

Lure

Darkness bites at my heels.
Damp beneath my eyes, south
of my heart, beating. Gather
all that is mine, strength
hold fast.. embed. Pierce
this flesh you see, devour.
Engage all that we could
have... touch all that lies
beneath your skin, slither...
Wrap your soul around
my heart.. strangle.
Easily distracted,
simple.. cool breath,
nipples inlaid with
hot kisses.. heat
impacted.. sweat
rejected.. slumber.

10 comments:

The Savage said...

0o0o00o0o.... Savage likes....

Very nice, Indi. Very nice indeed.

Indi said...

Savvy ~ Thankyou ...*kisses*


Indi

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1manview said...

Nice flow.. Sweet ...

Red Shoes said...

I wish I could write poetry...

You are wonderful at it...

I hope all is well today...

~shoes~

Indi said...

1manview ~ Thank you ;)

Indi

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Indi said...

Red Shoes ~ I don't always get it right. Some times it's fluent. Thank you *blushing*


Indi

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Neurosis said...

Deep. I love it. =)

Spiky Zora Jones said...

indi: oh yeah, this poem comes at the reader like fire...each word is like fingers of fire. makes me hot.

when happens when you wake, there's more to tell. come on baby, burn me...like wild fire.

loved your poem. xxx

Indi said...

Neurosis ~ * smiling* thank you


Indi

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Indi said...

Spiky ~ Yes there's more to come... but I have to concerntrate and I can't when I read your blog!! I'm all hot n bothered now *phew* Thanks Spiky... your comments mean so much to me.


Indi

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